Rough draft of a poem that's making me bleed from every pore?

YES totally agree^^ modest much? It's amazing I disagree that it's a rough draft:) amazing amazing amazing bit risky being on the net with copy right?:/ it's really really really good (y) like the other answer when you 'finish'( not that it's already amazing) just remember to put into some structure but else this is really good! Well done (: